Up to book 41 of 45 but John (Saunders) and myself are stuck on this name and the event.
We do not think it is a National County Championship final because it was played in November
but we fully open to any suggestions.
John has been marvelous at finding other names that Mr Aitken has hastily scribbled down and
this has often led to him finding out all kinds of other details about the player in question.
(I expect the same as someone here hopefully fills in the blanks.)
But here we are stumped. Who is the player and what is the event.
Three different sources, the book 41 index, the actual score sheet and from Aitken's owns index.

The game where we see Aitken employing his favorite defence to the Lopez.
Sadly in this game white did not play 10.Rxe4+ when the fun begins.
J H McTonedy(?) - J Aitken, NCC(?), 05.11.1977 (Bonfire Night!)
Thank You in advance.
Edit: The '1984' you see is the number of the game given by Aitken.